Here are some of the stories we wrote about Wellington Zoo!
Enjoy!!
Yesterday the Rainbow Patch kids went to Wellington Zoo. We got to the zoo on a bus. Our bags were put underneath the bus. When we got there the weather was really cold and we went to the Elephant house to have lunch. In the Elephant House were some bats. We looked around the zoo. My favourite animal was the baboons. They were really funny because they did poos. Before we got back on the bus my group got to play. The people in my group were me, Tsarine, Phoenix, Kayleb, Tipene and Ayush. My parent helper was my mum and Miss Cooper. I had so much fun at the zoo.
By Madeline
Yesterday the Rainbow Patch went to the zoo. We got there on two buses. We were on the second bus and Room 21 was on the first bus. Their bus was meant to be there before us but we were there before them because their bus broke down. I saw a giraffe and a baboon at the zoo. My favourite animal was a chimpanzee and a tiger. My least favourite animal was the cheeter because they freak me out. I had a fantastic time going to the zoo.
By Emily M
Yesterday we went to Wellington Zoo. We went on two buses. When we got there was saw sun bears and a pelican. Pelicans have long beaks. These were the people in my group: Kayal, Ashely, Ethan, Harmony and me. The leader of the group was Willie. My favourite animal was the sun bears but I didn't like the tigers because it sounded like it was hungry. On the way back to school I fell asleep on the bus.
By Tyson
Yesterday the Rainbow Patch went to Wellington Zoo. We went there on two different buses. I saw a baboon and a chimpanzee but my favourite animal was the giraffe because it had a long neck.
By Ashley
These are just some of the fantastic stories we wrote about Wellington Zoo. We would love some feedback/feedfoward on our writing. We are always trying to become better writers.
Love, Room 16
Hi room 16, I had a fantastic time at the zoo, seeing everyone enjoy themselves was great too.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to see all of the beautiful pictures you all have drawn.
You have the best teacher in the school by far...lol
Hope to hear heaps of Hi Tracy's around the school too.
What wonderful stories. I love the detail. It was a fun day and we did see lots of animals. Keep up the good work room 16. I will keep looking at the blogs. Mandy
ReplyDeleteI love your story ash, sounds like your class had a brilliant time at the zoo looking at all the animals.
ReplyDeleteHi room 16 i'm kayal we should put up signs to stop people killing endangered animals so we help animals live.
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