Writing about the Weather.

The children in Room 16 have created stories about the weather. Last week the weather wasn't very nice, so we wrote stories about HOW THE WEATHER MAKES US FEEL. We are working hard to use descriptive words in our stories. These are stories we wrote INDEPENDENTLY! Miss Cooper gave us the story starter "Today the weather is...." Then we had to write all by ourselves.

Today the weather is wet. It is pouring. I will have heaps of fun. I am going to play with my brother. The weather makes me feel happy.
By Tyson

Today the weather is wet. It makes me sad because I can't play outside with my friends.
By Jakob

Today the weather is wet. It makes me feel mad because I am not allowed to get my cast wet.
By Makenzie

Today the weather is bad. It makes me feel happy because I like playing in the rain. I like to play in the rain because I like getting wet.
By Madeline

We would love to hear your feedback on our stories. We would also love to hear some ideas on how we can improve our writing.

Love, Room 16